[HyoRi]

Originally Posted by aluminium

Lol maybe I become ur personal critque assistant

The Good:
You got the white balance right, no funny out of colors which doesn't ruin the magnificant blue in the sky.

You followed my advice about adding 1/3 of the picture of the ground and 2/3 of the picture in the sky which gives the sky alot more depth!

The picture ain't noisy

U got your horizon straight! Many people tend to forget.

The Not so good:
Maybe pointing to an area which had more lights would be nice to fill the dark black areas with glowing orange!

Maybe you should try taking a HDR photo which can bring out slight details on the buildings and still have the lovely sky. If you don't know whats HDR you can pm me.

Gd luck lovely photo this time, keep posting!

Heh, thanks! I did some work with PS this time round, the previous photo was unedited. The area is near Tampines IKEA, so not much buildings or lights there. Beautiful sunset through the clouds though.

My camera picked up too little details to do a HDR.

[HyoRi]

Originally Posted by Lime43

i think the model is her

I think her hairstyle can be better though

[leandro]

Originally Posted by aluminium

How's my model shoot? :X


The good:

Theres good contrast between the tiles the model is sitting on and her.

You caught the model at the right moment with the smile

You use a appropriate depth of field.

The Not so Good:

The picture background is distracting
1) The finger on the left
2) The floor below the tiles under the models feet
3) The White pillars at the back were a bad choice (more about this latar)

I can tell your taking in a High tone, but the overexposure is killing the pink color in the shirt and her complexion, too much overexposure, a little is enough.

Since your taking in high tone, the model needs a contrasting background and the pillars are white which kinda blends her into the background rather than make her stand out.

You skimped on serious photoshop editing as I can tell as you didn't photoshop her face, and her hair. Her calves are abit large (no offence) which
you could have liquidified them in photoshop.

The pink on her shirt aint saturated enough.

The black part between the two white pillars is distracting.

Look at ur gear cannot go easy on you liao

Thanks ar it is me hahaha. Shot by my friend who doesn't know how to even focus. Want to tell him?

[leandro]

Originally Posted by HyoRi

I think her hairstyle can be better though

If you've seen me with my unrebonded hair, you would have swore that this is the best hairstyle ever, I tell you. Hahhaa.

[JustRaied]

Originally Posted by Lime43

went zoo today after like 6 years

r those monkeys humping?!

[aluminium]

Originally Posted by churner

hahahaha i think it's his sister or its herself.either way,big "ouch" from mr. aluminium

anyways nice shot aluminium,love the contrast.the behind of the tiger seems a little over saturated though.if the eyes look directly into your cam...woah...that would make a even more fantastic shot

Wah Si Liao im on death roll

Lol but u say hows my model shoot mah

Hmm ur right maybe i saturate too much liao, sad la i do drive mode only 5fps not enough to capture tiger lookin at me if had 1ds then

Oh yea about the hdr, cameras don't have such thing as hdr feature. You have to do exposure compensation then merge all the photos from -2 to +2 go read up on it, only cs2 and above can do it. I got a pic of almost extreme dynamic range but I use HDR and the photo looks much better but horizon is slanted maybe i post latar.

[aluminium]

I don't think this photo is particularly spectacular but im just postin to show u HDR mergin.

[leandro]

Originally Posted by aluminium

Wah Si Liao im on death roll

Lol but u say hows my model shoot mah

Hmm ur right maybe i saturate too much liao, sad la i do drive mode only 5fps not enough to capture tiger lookin at me if had 1ds then

Oh yea about the hdr, cameras don't have such thing as hdr feature. You have to do exposure compensation then merge all the photos from -2 to +2 go read up on it, only cs2 and above can do it. I got a pic of almost extreme dynamic range but I use HDR and the photo looks much better but horizon is slanted maybe i post latar.

Haha I say shoot not shot ma. Lol there's different dah. Haha.

[aluminium]

Originally Posted by CYNx3.

Haha I say shoot not shot ma. Lol there's different dah. Haha.

You win la you win Just a Big Big Ouch for me.

[JustRaied]

Originally Posted by aluminium

I don't think this photo is particularly spectacular but im just postin to show u HDR mergin.

hdr merge? sure bo how come all in monochrome like that only got botches of color

[HyoRi]

Originally Posted by CYNx3.

If you've seen me with my unrebonded hair, you would have swore that this is the best hairstyle ever, I tell you. Hahhaa.

Show me some proof!

[HyoRi]

Originally Posted by aluminium

Wah Si Liao im on death roll

Lol but u say hows my model shoot mah

Hmm ur right maybe i saturate too much liao, sad la i do drive mode only 5fps not enough to capture tiger lookin at me if had 1ds then

Oh yea about the hdr, cameras don't have such thing as hdr feature. You have to do exposure compensation then merge all the photos from -2 to +2 go read up on it, only cs2 and above can do it. I got a pic of almost extreme dynamic range but I use HDR and the photo looks much better but horizon is slanted maybe i post latar.

I know about HDR, just saying the details my cam picked up(ie not enough lighting) is not enough to make a HDR.

[aluminium]

Originally Posted by PrinceRaied

hdr merge? sure bo how come all in monochrome like that only got botches of color

Heres the origninal
The black rock and white sky was too much for the camera sensor 2 of the many photos i took.

this is very random

[buaya]

Originally Posted by PrinceRaied

r those monkeys humping?!

Doubt so... anyway, here're the humping pics

#1


#2


#3